I like your picture, but it's a bit scary! It makes me think about what the earth would be like if we let it get more and more polluted. Your poem is good, but you gave away the answer at the end! Maybe you can change the last line to make people work a bit harder to figure out the answer :)
Hi Joan,
ReplyDeleteI like your picture, but it's a bit scary! It makes me think about what the earth would be like if we let it get more and more polluted. Your poem is good, but you gave away the answer at the end! Maybe you can change the last line to make people work a bit harder to figure out the answer :)
I will look forward to reading more on your blog.
Renee :)