Making a connection

This term we have been learning about making good comments on different blogs.We had to make sure our comments were positive,helpful and thoughtful.I enjoyed posting comments on different blogs because they might also comment on mine.The challenging part was making it positive and specific.It is easy to be positive but it is hard to be specific.You need to also connect with the blogpost.I look for something similar that I know about.So far I am doing great blog commenting on peoples
blogpost. Here is a example of a comment I wrote.I have made a connection by sharing something I did on mothers day.

     

Surprising visit to Pak 'n Save

I was excited! Today Room 7 went to Pak'nSave to learn about the food labels. We took the bus there, the bus was really nice and warm.First we went to  look at the cereals.We looked at the weet-bix  because we thought it was really healthy.We checked  the back of the weet-bix box on the food label.We found out that it had a low sugar.

Next we went to look at the Molenberg bread.I was surprised that  Molenberg was really healthy because I thought that it was not healthy.
The Molenberg sugar level was only 2.8g and the energy was 902 kj.
Before we went back to school we got a $60 voucher from Pak ‘n Save.
With our $60 voucher our class is going to have a healthy lunch together.

The faster you go the worse it looks!!

!!The faster you go the worst it looks!! Yahoo!! This morning Room 7 had some tips from Constable Julie.We were learning about stopping distance with big trucks. We were also learning to be safe while crossing the roads.I learnt that if the roads are wet we should always slow down.We also learnt cars should always be safe on roads. Be safe while driving on the road and look both ways while crossing the road. By Joan

!!The faster you go the worst it looks!!

!!The faster you go the worst it looks!!

Yahoo!! This morning Room 7  had some tips from Constable Julie.We were learning about stopping distance with big trucks. We were also learning to be safe while crossing the roads.I  learnt that if the roads are wet we should always slow down.We also learnt cars should always be safe on roads. Be safe while driving on the road and look both ways while crossing the road.

!!The faster you go the worst it looks!!

Yahoo!! This morning Room 7  had some tips from Constable Julie.We were learning about stopping distance with big trucks. We were also learning to be safe while crossing the roads.I  learnt that if the roads are wet we should always slow down.We also learnt cars should always be safe on roads. Be safe while driving on the road and look both ways while crossing the road.

Making a great comment

We are learning to make a good comment
Positive: Your picture looks pretty
Helpful:Was the book really interesting to you.
Thoughtful:I hope I get a chance to read it

Good Blog Comments

 

We are learning to write a good blogpost

Helpful:Next time I will ask a question

Thoughtful:I said that I made my mother some breakfast too

Positive:I said her mother will have a great time yesterday